Do no create a feedback thread for a story on Lumos that isn't yours. The author is expected to do this, and it is their right.
Authors, do not create more than one thread per story. For conveinance, post a link to your story in the feedback thread.
Please make sure that any comment, critical or not, is said respectivly and not meant to intentionaly hurt the author/reveiwer. Instead of being rude, try constructive criticism.